check out my rap song? You might like it, you might not

[Kimilsung]

So, i really want to become a better musician, a better artist, but often, other people notice your flaws better then you. Note, I'm not that one guy with a shitty mic with really obnoxious breathing, i skipped that stage. I just need to be less "it's OK." To more "Yo. That's you??? You can spit flames, G."

And your feedback and guidance can help me improve myself. I might think it sounds good because I've been listening to it for 5 hours watching it transform from nothing to something, but you might not like it because I've been blinded by the disorientation of listening to the same thing over and over.

Here's my grimy, gritty old school rap song about the streets:
Spotify: https://mandrillapp.com/track/click...TdkODJiY2Y5OGY2OTJjMDJjNzBhZTY1Y2QwOVwiXX0ifQ
Apple music: https://itunes.apple.com/gb/artist/ibby-squish/1342043887

 

[Kimilsung]

Cmon guys! I know your all middle aged men but you can't be stuck in the past and listening to rick astley and metallica all your life. A much better suggestion from that era in history would be "chel baker - almost blue." I'm quite fond of jazz.